Exercises
Exercise 1
Find two credible sources related to your chosen topic and write a brief summary of each, explaining how they will support your argument.
Example Answer
Source 1:
Solar Power and Energy Efficiency" by Dr. Jane Smith. This article discusses the advancements in solar panel technology and their impact on reducing household energy consumption. It will support the section on the effectiveness of solar energy.
Source 2:
Renewable Energy Policies and Challenges" from the International Energy Agency. This report outlines the global policies surrounding renewable energy and the challenges faced in implementation, which will be used in the section discussing potential obstacles.
Exercise 2
Draft your introduction and one body paragraph, focusing on clarity, coherence, and the integration of research.
Example Answer
Introduction:
As the world faces the growing threat of climate change, renewable energy sources like solar power have become essential. This paper examines how solar panels can significantly reduce energy consumption in households, despite the challenges of initial costs and installation.
Body Paragraph:
One of the primary benefits of solar panels is their ability to lower electricity bills. According to a 2023 study by the International Solar Energy Society, households using solar panels save an average of 30% on their energy costs annually. This not only reduces the financial burden on families but also decreases reliance on non-renewable energy sources.
Exercise 3
Exchange drafts with a peer and provide feedback on coherence, transitions, and language precision. Then, revise your own draft based on the feedback received.
Example Feedback
Coherence:
The transition from discussing solar energy's benefits to its challenges could be smoother. Consider adding a linking sentence.
Transitions:
You might use 'However' at the beginning of the paragraph on challenges to clearly contrast it with the benefits.
Precision:
Instead of 'some people think,' you could say 'many experts argue.'